Paikea Writing Challenges

The crash Boom, boom went the house, shaking as if a giant  was walking right beside it. Splash, splash went the bath water, sploshing as if the ocean waves were breaking in the tub. Crackle, crackle went the fire in the hearth, flaring as if a volcano was erupting in the lounge. Swoosh, swoosh went the curtains in the bedroom, swirling as if the wind was howling inside. Clang, clang went the pots in the kitchen, singing as if they were toddlers making music. Honk, honk went the car's horn, crashing as it flew uncontrollable into the tiled roof of the house.  Leah    

Help! I gasped for air as I arose into reality hearing the screaming and cries down stairs. My hands trembled and shook. Am I still in the dream running through my mind? Clenching the wall tiptoeing down the stairs, my heart pounding in my chest. I finally reached the bottom. It took seconds but felt like years. Suddenly I froze with nothing to say except HELP. Lying there on the ground was my dad with a gunshot destroying the side of his head. It was 1943, the World was at War. My dad was dead and it was their fault. Leah

 The Anime Soldiers As I was walking around every single one of these statues, I saw electricity from one's hands, I   rushed over to see and then...  “CLONE, NO JUTSU!” Others spawn around him as the exact same. I turned around and Bonk! I ran into another. I jumped over them and “KA ME HA ME HAAA!” I sent a big lazer into the circle knocking most over. Still left with most of my energy I went super saiyan. “RASENGAN!” I got pushed back. I pulled out my sword and “DRAGONS WRATH” I rushed through the rest and had won. By Lachie

Pollution, pollution, pollution. Melted , greasy garbage. Horrible air, disgusting smells you can’t bare. Brown and salty bits of trash, the animals are getting injured pretty fast. Think of the giraffes , and the whales too, Make a better earth for me and you. I’d like to leave, but that would be too fast. To make all of your animals stop being put in the trash. Pollution, pollution, pollution, pollution. Make a better earth for your friends, stop pretending. So we can all have a great ending. Think not just for you, but for OUR happiness. And think of your amazing planet. By Emily

As my feet trudge through the icky, gurling swamp bits of horrific swampy type fungi cling to my worn out plain black sneakers. I have no idea of any place or the directions that I intend to follow or locate. I just keep on heading straight forwards. The smell is like worn sick it is one of the disgusting substances I have ever smelt in all my days. I wrinkle my nose at the disgusting pong but it doesn't help. I have no idea where I am or how in lords name I got to this land of supposed ick.   By Henry

STARWARS Dead black bushes surrounded me . movement above my head caught my attention,   " I N C O M I N G ! ” Someone shrieked. With no time to lose I rolled to cover. but too late, the impact of the energy grenade threw me off my feet and into a nearby tree. D A R K N E S S … I don't know how long I was out cold but slowly I regained consciousness. I was half sprawled across a fallen tree root. Pain stabbed as I tried to open my dirty eyes! The jungle was now dead silent. Was I the only survivor 25 lightyears away from home, on a planet far far away ?... By Kenta