Help

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Help!
I gasped for air as I arose into reality hearing the screaming and cries down stairs. My hands
trembled and shook. Am I still in the dream running through my mind? Clenching the wall tiptoeing
down the stairs, my heart pounding in my chest. I finally reached the bottom. It took seconds but
felt like years. Suddenly I froze with nothing to say except HELP. Lying there on the ground was
my dad with a gunshot destroying the side of his head. It was 1943, the World was at War. My dad
was dead and it was their fault.

Leah

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  1. Mrs PApril 12, 2020 at 3:07 AM

    Wow Leah, your 100WC is fast paced and full of suspense. You have used loads of interesting words which add drama to your writing. Great work!
    Mrs P (Team 100WC)
    Wellington, New Zealand

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