Mess We Made

-
Splat! ‘Oh good gravy what are you doing?’ yelled Susie.
‘Why, I'm making pie,’ replied Mia. Mia was making pie but it wasn't in the kitchen. It was on the
ceiling and just to make it worse it was the wrong colour. Jack thought it a joke but it was a prank
that backfired, pie landing on Jack as it fell. Ha! Jack had such an ego. Meanwhile...boom! Oh no,
what a catastrophe and dad was nearly home. 100 kids were left to turn this bomb shelter into a
castle. Luckily, they did it. The house was pitch perfection.

 Tipani

Comments

  1. UnknownApril 7, 2019 at 2:18 AM

    Nice short story Tipani. Love the descriptive words!!

    ReplyDelete

Post a Comment

Popular posts from this blog

The Anime Soldiers

-
 The Anime Soldiers As I was walking around every single one of these statues, I saw electricity from one's hands, I   rushed over to see and then...  “CLONE, NO JUTSU!” Others spawn around him as the exact same. I turned around and Bonk! I ran into another. I jumped over them and “KA ME HA ME HAAA!” I sent a big lazer into the circle knocking most over. Still left with most of my energy I went super saiyan. “RASENGAN!” I got pushed back. I pulled out my sword and “DRAGONS WRATH” I rushed through the rest and had won. By Lachie
Read more

The crash

-
The crash Boom, boom went the house, shaking as if a giant  was walking right beside it. Splash, splash went the bath water, sploshing as if the ocean waves were breaking in the tub. Crackle, crackle went the fire in the hearth, flaring as if a volcano was erupting in the lounge. Swoosh, swoosh went the curtains in the bedroom, swirling as if the wind was howling inside. Clang, clang went the pots in the kitchen, singing as if they were toddlers making music. Honk, honk went the car's horn, crashing as it flew uncontrollable into the tiled roof of the house.  Leah    
Read more