Paikea Writing Challenges

“WHHhyYYYyYyY!!??!?” Me and my friend screamed! WE WERE REALLLYYYYYY LATE. Or.. Really early….? It was..….1:00 PM? “ALARM CLOCK!!!!!!!!” I yelled.. like an apple that has sat on a tree for millions of years and STILL hasn't ripened yet. Get it? No?...ok. Now, we TRIED to go back to sleep, but there was a chicken outside, so….. We….. Might've…. Had a.. late night snack? OF COOKIES!- YEAH, COOKIES!! And sandwiches -  So, I usually- WAIT!! MATT!! WHAT’S THE SCRIPT SAY AGAIN!?!! “Umm… Your mom kissed a cookie goodnight and she ate you for a night snack?...” WRONG WAY ‘ROUND!! ( THE END .)        By Emily

I WAS SO CROSS THAT I RIPPED THE HEAD OFF A REAL SNAKE!! And that was the worst mistake I made in my in my WHOLE LIFE.  The venom from the snake slowly dribbled down its body and then onto my arm.  I felt instant unbearable pain I felt a slithery object crawling on me.  And then everything went dark I woke up in and dark and gloomy cave with a caveman like things surrounding me.  All of a sudden more came out holding spears. I never should run off into a forest just because I had to do homework. Alvin

“Ouch!” I was pushed to the biggest bully in the school, Harrison. I got right back up and punched him in the face. The fight has begun. He  punched me. I blocked the punch. He kicked me in the leg. “OW.” I was so mad now. I started fighting back like never before. Pow. Kapow. He hit his head against the wall. He was knocked out. Ding ding ding. Round two. I jump kicked him in the stomach. “OOF” he said in pain. Kapow. I punched him in the face. Ding ding ding. I won. He never bullied me again Wayne

Road Problems I stomped my foot on the brake as the traffic light turned red suddenly. The car stopped. I blinked. Breathing hard, I sunk slowly into my seat. As the light turned bright green slowly, I started to go slowly, my car going slowly but steady. Suddenly some idiot  dashed in front of me with his car. I had to stop mid-road. My mind was whirling. This guy just... I shook my head. I had to keep going. The light. I rolled my eyes with disgust and pressed on the acceleration. I was so cross that I almost did... never mind. Stephanie