Paikea Writing Challenges

Sloth Takeover As I walked through the broken down plants. I thought I saw' an animal in the plants. I rubbed my broken glasses. When I rubbed it I saw a ruin. But not just any ruin it was full of sloths!  Suddenly a spear went whoosh right pass me I shouted to the sloths, “I come in peace.. I also got a gift!” I pulled from my pocket a bottle of whiskey. I gave it to the chief. The chief drunk some and shouted in sloth language, “ yummy.” I shouted,  “yes! I have made peace with the sloth tribe”. By Yi Feng

T he astronaut blasted into space in his spaceship. He was heading to Venus, then… bang!! He crashed into an asteroid that sent him flying. Everything went black. He awoke on an orange planet and sniffed the air it smelt like… nothing!!! He heard footsteps, he looked up. The astronaut saw a small, crimson red furred figure standing on the ground. “Who are you?” he asked. The figure said nothing.       Maybe he’s a alien!! He thought. Then it started rummaging around the shuttle. It started wandering through and around the ship what, no.. who is he? “Do u know da way?”                   By Kieran                  

S P I D E R M A N FAR FROM HOME SUIT This is my new suit. But it's the wrong colour! I think it looks dope. It's the most advanced tech in a suit ever made, second most advanced suit I mean. Sorry, Iron man I totally forgot about you. Last year I saved the world and designed a titanium suit just for me, to be honest I don't know why I did that. On the new suit I like how instead of blue on the sides, its black. That is my own opinion on the new suit. Tell me your opinion on the suit. By Kenta

I T   AS T H E  W R O NG COLOUR It was Sunday morning and I finished painting my dragon. Then I accidentally “ACCIDENTALLY!!” sat on the paint an it got ruined. That was the most biggest regret in my life but…still it looked like a Fire breathing dragon. Even it it  looked like the most ugliest dragon ever. I’ve been planning to repaint the dragon but I can’t repeat it cause I’ve moved on to drawing anime. but...I still draw dragons sometime. Still when I paint I get the wrong colour. Every single time when I paint. Still I like to do it. Edrae

Splat! ‘Oh good gravy what are you doing?’ yelled Susie. ‘Why, I'm making pie,’ replied Mia. Mia was making pie but it wasn't in the kitchen. It was on the ceiling and just to make it worse it was the wrong colour. Jack thought it a joke but it was a prank that backfired, pie landing on Jack as it fell. Ha! Jack had such an ego. Meanwhile... boom! Oh no, what a catastrophe and dad was nearly home. 100 kids were left to turn this bomb shelter into a castle. Luckily, they did it. The house was pitch perfection. Tipani

I woke up and wow! My whole room was purple and pink it was the wrong color. My dream came true. I wished everything would be gum and it came true. I said hey if everything’s gum then I can eat everything so I nibbled a little on my bed sheets oh my god a small hole was in my bed, Agghhhhhhhh it was so slimy and gooey and sour. I screeched to mum “Mum the bed’s gummy! I ate some of my bed sheet.” Mum shouted angrily, “oh, you child.Sort this mess out!” By Yi Feng

“(Yawn…) Astonishing morning… ( Beep!!) A.. Reminder? I don’t remember adding a reminder on my phone… What does it sa- OMGGGGG!! I need to make a whole dress in…. 15 HOURS!?!??!! OKOKKOKKKOOKOKOK!!!! Now… google… NO INTERNET!?! There's a signal in the garden….. ok..” ( walks out to the yard ) “Yes!! Ok…..TradeMe.… Ah, silky fabric! Wait.. shipment… lowest is… OVERNIGHTED!?! Only… 13 HOURS LEFT!?! Uhh.. wait, I'll private chat… “ ( Could we have a compromise? As in… 5 hour shipment?? Ok! Thanks SO much! How much? Mhm.. ok… wait… 1500!?!?!!! Fine, ok.) ( hours passed. ) BUT IT WAS THE WRONG COLOUR!!!!!! Emily